What is the SWS? I am pleased you were able to use the prompt given for this weeks challenge. It is really important to check your work before you submit it. Unfortunately you have made a lot of mistakes with your spelling and punctuation. You must remember to have a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence. You had an interesting story, however, it got a bit lost amongst the mistakes 🙁 Remember to edit and keep up the interesting story lines.
Hi Irina,
What is the SWS? I am pleased you were able to use the prompt given for this weeks challenge. It is really important to check your work before you submit it. Unfortunately you have made a lot of mistakes with your spelling and punctuation. You must remember to have a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence. You had an interesting story, however, it got a bit lost amongst the mistakes 🙁 Remember to edit and keep up the interesting story lines.
Mrs Petersen (Team 100WC) Australia