I like how you explained the meteor because it makes it in my head imagining it. But make sure you add more punctuation a bit. – Best Friend Karolina 5B Gearies Primary School 2015
WWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW! Zaeem , you’ve really amazed me this time. The meteor was one of the scariest things in your story.
by your best friend janna =)=)=)
Well Done Zaeem! I was expecting dragon’s from you as you love them. You know the D word means Dragon! From Mrs Mystery 100wc Venezuela and Mexico
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I like how you explained the meteor because it makes it in my head imagining it. But make sure you add more punctuation a bit. – Best Friend Karolina 5B
Gearies Primary School 2015
WWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!
Zaeem , you’ve really amazed me this time. The meteor was one of the scariest things in your story.
by your best friend janna =)=)=)
Well Done Zaeem!
I was expecting dragon’s from you as you love them.
You know the D word means Dragon!
From Mrs Mystery
100wc
Venezuela and Mexico