Wow Sachien! What fabulous use of the narrative voice to draw me into your story, I really like the way you used precise detail to create a mood. Next time try to create links. I want to know more about the dark wizard and what happens to you.
Miss A
Wow Sachien! What fabulous use of the narrative voice to draw me into your story, I really like the way you used precise detail to create a mood. Next time try to create links. I want to know more about the dark wizard and what happens to you.
Miss A
wow amazing piece of work there Sachien. you used amazing adjectives, I like the part when u wrote the mystical cupcake. Well done.
by: Amina