Oh Aadeeb, I can imagine just how nervous you must have been sitting on that seat at the front of the roller coaster, I want to know what happens next!
Remember to use varied sentence lengths to control your reader more.
Well done I enjoyed reading this.
Miss A
Oh Aadeeb, I can imagine just how nervous you must have been sitting on that seat at the front of the roller coaster, I want to know what happens next!
Remember to use varied sentence lengths to control your reader more.
Well done I enjoyed reading this.
Miss A