Thank-you for your entry to the 100wc this week, Ozkaa.
I was impressed with your use of punctuation. you have used full stops, commas, inverted commas and elipses. Keep working on your punctuation skills!
I like the way you have added details, like when you said Dixy was terrified and when you shared your character’s thoughts; “this could change my life forever.” I wasn’t sure if we needed to know that he liked chicken and chips though!
Great work. Keep it up!
Mrs Evans (100wc UK)
Thank-you for your entry to the 100wc this week, Ozkaa.
I was impressed with your use of punctuation. you have used full stops, commas, inverted commas and elipses. Keep working on your punctuation skills!
I like the way you have added details, like when you said Dixy was terrified and when you shared your character’s thoughts; “this could change my life forever.” I wasn’t sure if we needed to know that he liked chicken and chips though!
Great work. Keep it up!
Mrs Evans (100wc UK)
Some great detail Adem to draw me in. Remember to check your spelling next time
Keep it up , I enjoyed reading this.
Miss A