Wow Hamzah, what an effective way of getting your message across to your reader and making it clear what huge loss each fallen soldier was. Well done.
I really enjoyed reading this Hamzah and particularly liked how little details about your character’s life (his boxing career, fur example) ensure that your reader is really engaged and ultimately moved by the sad ending. Well done.
Thank you very much Mr Evans. I thank you sincerely for not giving me a negative comment!
Bye! Hamzah
good work , I like the litter for rammer day
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Wow Hamzah, what an effective way of getting your message across to your reader and making it clear what huge loss each fallen soldier was. Well done.
I really enjoyed reading this Hamzah and particularly liked how little details about your character’s life (his boxing career, fur example) ensure that your reader is really engaged and ultimately moved by the sad ending. Well done.
Thank you very much Mr Evans. I thank you sincerely for not giving me a negative comment!
Bye! Hamzah
good work , I like the litter for rammer day