What a fabulous way of responding to this week’s prompt; marvellous use of descriptive language to paint an emotive picture for your reader. Careful not to mix tenses
Hi Esha,
I like the way you told your reader
indirectly that you felt your family was fading away.
Next time you could use onomotopia!
By: Prithikaa 🙂
What a fabulous way of responding to this week’s prompt; marvellous use of descriptive language to paint an emotive picture for your reader. Careful not to mix tenses
Thank you Miss Anand for your wonderful comment. And I will be sure to take on the advice for the tenses.
Hi Esha,
I like the way you told your reader
indirectly that you felt your family was fading away.
Next time you could use onomotopia!
By: Prithikaa 🙂
Thanks Prithikaa