Well done Hamza, what an effective way of responding to the prompt, with some really personal detail to emphasise just how much people sacrificed. Remember to check your capitals
Hamza, I felt like I needed to grab a tissue whilst reading your piece. You have really grasped the emotions of those soldiers writing to family members left behind.
I like how you included factual information, such as the trenches and that you gave your reader an insight as to what the future held for this poor brave soldier.
Next time remember to start your sentences with a capital letter.
Well done Hamza, what an effective way of responding to the prompt, with some really personal detail to emphasise just how much people sacrificed. Remember to check your capitals
hi miss nanand thank for ashing
Again, another thoughtful piece of writing! Some more descriptive detail might help in future but a great effort and moving read.
thank
Hamza, I felt like I needed to grab a tissue whilst reading your piece. You have really grasped the emotions of those soldiers writing to family members left behind.
I like how you included factual information, such as the trenches and that you gave your reader an insight as to what the future held for this poor brave soldier.
Next time remember to start your sentences with a capital letter.
Until then, keep up the good work.