world war poem

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3 Responses to world war poem

  1. nanand says:

    Brilliant use if descriptive language in your poem made me really picture the horrors of war in my mind Adem. I especially like how you ended with an image of the poppies. Well done

  2. Mr Evans - Beal High School says:

    A thoughtful response, Adem, with really evocative use of sound in particular. Very respectful and well written.

  3. ozkaa says:

    Thanks for replaying Mr Evans you are now helping with my learning thankyou , Adem

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