Well done Aadeeb, an original way of responding to the prompt. I really like the way you address someone who sacrificed their life in a grown up way. Keep writing.
I think your letter is a wonderful tribute for the Unknown Soldier. You have shared what has happened after the war, including another war and people now living in peace. How sad it is when we think of so many lives lost in war, many lost in unknown locations. For the Unknown Soldier, he has come to represent all of those who lie unknown. Well done.
Down here in Australia, our news has carried pictures of the 888,246 ceramic poppies placed in the grounds of the Tower of London. How sad it is each represents a British military death. I lost a great uncle in WWI. He was in the Australian Army and one of the around 60,000 Australians never to return home.
Thank you for sharing a thoughtful letter.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
Hello Aadeeb
I like the way you have chosen to respond to this prompt using a letter. Your writing shows a lot of sensitivity to the plight of those who fought in the war and how they are now respected and remembered. Your writing is very thoughtful and considered.
Great writing.
It’s a brilliant piece! I really liked they way you put your feelings for the people who sacrificed their lives. Please keep on writing. We want more from you to read. Thank you.
Dear Aadeeb: It’s an impressive piece of writing! Heartfelt congratulations!! On top of your linguistic skills, I am touched with your deep-rooted emotional expression and the way you described towards your intent to know the unknown, and to let him/her know how the world respect him/her and proud of him/her as well the world’s collective achievements to live in peace. Notwithstanding, at the conclusion, your expectation of a war-free world is indeed honored with greater solidarity. Do continue writing – indeed encouraging!
You write so beautifully and with such sincerity that one can’t help but be touched by the ideas you convey through the written word. Now, they say in order to master any skill,one must practice and you have a talent, so keep on writing, for you have an amazing gift!
Well done Aadeeb, an original way of responding to the prompt. I really like the way you address someone who sacrificed their life in a grown up way. Keep writing.
Hello Aadeeb,
I think your letter is a wonderful tribute for the Unknown Soldier. You have shared what has happened after the war, including another war and people now living in peace. How sad it is when we think of so many lives lost in war, many lost in unknown locations. For the Unknown Soldier, he has come to represent all of those who lie unknown. Well done.
Down here in Australia, our news has carried pictures of the 888,246 ceramic poppies placed in the grounds of the Tower of London. How sad it is each represents a British military death. I lost a great uncle in WWI. He was in the Australian Army and one of the around 60,000 Australians never to return home.
Thank you for sharing a thoughtful letter.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia
thank you for your comment and telling me about Australia.
Aadeeb
Hello Aadeeb
I like the way you have chosen to respond to this prompt using a letter. Your writing shows a lot of sensitivity to the plight of those who fought in the war and how they are now respected and remembered. Your writing is very thoughtful and considered.
Great writing.
Impressive!
A good choice of descriptive words and very emotional.
An excellent piece of writing!
It’s a brilliant piece! I really liked they way you put your feelings for the people who sacrificed their lives. Please keep on writing. We want more from you to read. Thank you.
Dear Aadeeb: It’s an impressive piece of writing! Heartfelt congratulations!! On top of your linguistic skills, I am touched with your deep-rooted emotional expression and the way you described towards your intent to know the unknown, and to let him/her know how the world respect him/her and proud of him/her as well the world’s collective achievements to live in peace. Notwithstanding, at the conclusion, your expectation of a war-free world is indeed honored with greater solidarity. Do continue writing – indeed encouraging!
Dear Aadeeb,
You write so beautifully and with such sincerity that one can’t help but be touched by the ideas you convey through the written word. Now, they say in order to master any skill,one must practice and you have a talent, so keep on writing, for you have an amazing gift!
Adem
Dear Aadeeb Great work but try to Put better word ,Adem