Oh Zainab, some really beautiful descriptive lines really pull at your reader’s heartstrings, well done. Next time think about the flow; I think you could swap the order of your fourth and fifth verse.
Wow! This is a fantastic piece of writing! Mrs Ciobanu and I think that you did an amazing job, using descriptive language and creating the right atmosphere.
Well done!
Oh Zainab, some really beautiful descriptive lines really pull at your reader’s heartstrings, well done. Next time think about the flow; I think you could swap the order of your fourth and fifth verse.
this is a very good blog! you described the smells and it was just really good
Wow! This is a fantastic piece of writing! Mrs Ciobanu and I think that you did an amazing job, using descriptive language and creating the right atmosphere.
Well done!
Thank you Hattie for your comment