Fab Adeeba! You chose a powerful way of getting your message across to your reader that really makes them feel empathy and so understands why we should remember
Adeeba, this is a great piece! I love how you wrote from the point of view of the soldier. You used some great vocabulary to describe what it was like in the war and how the soldier was feeling. I really enjoyed this!
Superb use of detail (the ‘smelly latrines’) make this feel very authentic and real. I wonder what Michael did that was so kind? I really enjoyed reading this, Adeeba.
Adeeba I like your remember letter, it was really amazing. I like the part where it said ” I was one of the soldiers who fought in WW1.” You have improved. – Karolina . T 🙂
Fab Adeeba! You chose a powerful way of getting your message across to your reader that really makes them feel empathy and so understands why we should remember
Oh my word, what a powerful piece of work, I thoughly enjoyed reading it.
Adeeba, this is a great piece! I love how you wrote from the point of view of the soldier. You used some great vocabulary to describe what it was like in the war and how the soldier was feeling. I really enjoyed this!
Superb use of detail (the ‘smelly latrines’) make this feel very authentic and real. I wonder what Michael did that was so kind? I really enjoyed reading this, Adeeba.
Adeeba I like your remember letter, it was really amazing. I like the part where it said ” I was one of the soldiers who fought in WW1.” You have improved. – Karolina . T 🙂