You have some very interesting ideas in this short story. I can see this story being developed into a thriller where the grandfather has a dark secret. I would say for you to concentrate on your grammar and punctuation to really grab your reader’s attention. Well done.
You have some very interesting ideas in this short story. I can see this story being developed into a thriller where the grandfather has a dark secret. I would say for you to concentrate on your grammar and punctuation to really grab your reader’s attention. Well done.