Again, wow. Your attention to detail in this short writing piece is excellent. I loved the detail of the door. I would love to see how you would make this story longer. Good job!!
Very good short paced story I like your use of adverbs Esha
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Again, wow. Your attention to detail in this short writing piece is excellent. I loved the detail of the door. I would love to see how you would make this story longer. Good job!!
Very good short paced story I like your use of adverbs
Esha