Wow I love this poem Maisha. It really helps every one to think about remembrance day and even better it’s an acrostic poem. I think you have really thought about it carefully and all the words relate to this special day! Also you have chosen words that really fit in. There is a strong feeling that Remberance can easily be remembered with your poem. Well done you have done a great job. Natalie at Mead School.
Very good poem. Well done.
Wow maisha your poem is emotional I like how you wrote people did 2 mins of silence well done
Riddhi
wow maisha that is a good piece of work I love your words good work it is a beautiful piece of work. I hope lots of people comment on it.
Well done mashia you have really thought about this poem well done this if fantastic
well done you have really thought about this well done
Wow I love this poem Maisha. It really helps every one to think about remembrance day and even better it’s an acrostic poem. I think you have really thought about it carefully and all the words relate to this special day! Also you have chosen words that really fit in. There is a strong feeling that Remberance can easily be remembered with your poem. Well done you have done a great job. Natalie at Mead School.
I felt that was really fun to read but there are no full stops
Nice work. well done