Very good poem. Well done.
Good work I really like the way you added a lot of detail, you could feel the emotion but you have repeated 1 word
Raman your poem is fun and interesting well done Riddhi
Great Raman, I really like how you wrote this poem with great description this is also is very good because it has a lot of emotion
Astonishing poem Raman, I like the part when you talk about the sadness in the poem and you talk about Remembrance Day. Next time make the poem make sense. I like how you put the Acrostic poem in order. Fascinating language from you
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Very good poem. Well done.
Good work I really like the way you added a lot of detail, you could feel the emotion but you have repeated 1 word
Raman your poem is fun and interesting well done
Riddhi
Great Raman, I really like how you wrote this poem with great description this is also is very good because it has a lot of emotion
Astonishing poem Raman, I like the part when you talk about the sadness in the poem and you talk about Remembrance Day. Next time make the poem make sense. I like how you put the Acrostic poem in order. Fascinating language from you