I like how you have written a poem Kaaruni, you have taken the prompt and made it your own. Well done for making the end of your sentences rhyme.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more!
Miss Heappey (Team 100WC)
I really like how on one of the lines you called it mop ies because it really made me laugh. On some of the lines it makes me imagine that I am at Flanders Field rembreing the soldiers.
Well done
Rhia
You have some good ideas in your poem Kaaruni. In the future concentrate on your structure and what you want the reader to feel. Well done.
I like how you have written a poem Kaaruni, you have taken the prompt and made it your own. Well done for making the end of your sentences rhyme.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more!
Miss Heappey (Team 100WC)
Thank you and I will take your advise. Kaaruni
Fascinating poem Kaaruni. I really liked your poem it has helped me understand all about world war one. It is useful to use in the future.
I really like how on one of the lines you called it mop ies because it really made me laugh. On some of the lines it makes me imagine that I am at Flanders Field rembreing the soldiers.
Well done
Rhia
Well Done Kaaruni
Esha
This sounds like it could be a rap! Well done, Mrs Coop, Mead School
An emotive poem! Fantastic imagery.