Great stuff Zaeem; I really loved the way that you combined action and descriptive detail to pull me into your exciting story ending. Remember to make every word count so that your ending is not so rushed.
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Great stuff Zaeem; I really loved the way that you combined action and descriptive detail to pull me into your exciting story ending. Remember to make every word count so that your ending is not so rushed.