Romana I like how you used repetition to create the tension in your story. Well done. Remember to make time to proof read before you publish to ensure your grammar is as good as it can be.
it is amazing romasa but next time make your story more exited but it was great!!!!!!!!!!!
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Romana I like how you used repetition to create the tension in your story. Well done. Remember to make time to proof read before you publish to ensure your grammar is as good as it can be.
it is amazing romasa but next time make your story more exited but it was great!!!!!!!!!!!