VERY NICE OLIVER
I like you using brackets so very well done
Your sentences were amazing!
Hi Oliver,
You have used the narrator’s voice well to draw me into the action of your story. Don’t forget to edit before you publish. I can see real signs of a talented here.
Mrs Moore
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VERY NICE OLIVER
I like you using brackets so very well done
Your sentences were amazing!
Hi Oliver,
You have used the narrator’s voice well to draw me into the action of your story. Don’t forget to edit before you publish.
I can see real signs of a talented here.
Mrs Moore