I like your fing because it has a good ending. it is ok
Wow! What an original and enthralling response to the prompt. I loved the way you used different sentence lengths to create effects. Next time try to use varied punctuation to create effects too. I can see signs of a talented writer here. Mrs Moore
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I like your fing because it has a good ending. it is ok
Wow! What an original and enthralling response to the prompt. I loved the way you used different sentence lengths to create effects. Next time try to use varied punctuation to create effects too. I can see signs of a talented writer here.
Mrs Moore