Oh my goodness, what a great mystery! What happened to Emily?
I really enjoyed the way you lulled your reader into a false sense of security before introducing your twist. Next time don’t forget to edit for missing punctuation.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Moore
Hi Mabishan,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
What a sad mysterious story you’ve written this week. I wonder where is Emily? What actually happened to her?
Good work this week.
Wow, I really like the mystery
The mystery made me curious and the story was great.
Oh my goodness, what a great mystery! What happened to Emily?
I really enjoyed the way you lulled your reader into a false sense of security before introducing your twist. Next time don’t forget to edit for missing punctuation.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Moore
Hi Mabishan,
I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
What a sad mysterious story you’ve written this week. I wonder where is Emily? What actually happened to her?
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/
love the horror part at the end
this is great
this is amazing
this is estatic the best work i’ve seen
this is estatic the best work i’ve seen