The Nightmare

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3 Responses to The Nightmare

  1. abbaf says:

    very good try to improve your use of punctuation

  2. nanand says:

    Hi Rayyan,

    This was a very spooky story; I really liked the way you made me want to find out what ‘they’ were and picture things for myself. Next time take the time to check through your work before you publish as I can see errors.

    Keep it up !

    Mrs Moore

  3. Rafay Idrees says:

    Very scary story, makes me wonder what would have happened next in the nightmare

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