The Abandoned Town

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2 Responses to The Abandoned Town

  1. nanand says:

    What a great way to use thoughts and the narrator’s voice to draw me into your story, well done.
    Next time check your pronouns match.

    Mrs Moore

  2. Janet Team100WC says:

    Great story Robert. I loved the way that the idea that there was no one at all about creeps up on you as you read it. The way you use lots of questions helps build a feeling of suspense. Well done!

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