Wow good suspense shay 🙂
Hi Shayaan,
You had a clear structure to your story and included the prompt well. Next time try to include a little action or a dilemma to really hook in your reader.
Mrs Moore
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Wow good suspense shay 🙂
Hi Shayaan,
You had a clear structure to your story and included the prompt well. Next time try to include a little action or a dilemma to really hook in your reader.
Mrs Moore