supermarket strike

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2 Responses to supermarket strike

  1. hussj says:

    Wow good suspense shay 🙂

  2. nanand says:

    Hi Shayaan,

    You had a clear structure to your story and included the prompt well. Next time try to include a little action or a dilemma to really hook in your reader.

    Mrs Moore

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