Unexpected

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2 Responses to Unexpected

  1. vacia says:

    this is some nice work m8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. nanand says:

    Hi Brindan,

    This was an action packed response to the prompt, you used thought well to draw me in. I love that you used varied vocabulary ; next time consider whether it is an appropriate fit for the sentence in which you are using it.

    Mrs Moore

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