Hi Yassine,
This was another exciting piece of writing. I really liked the way you used action and emotion to draw me in . Next time think about your punctuation and how you can use it to control your reader. I really want to know more about the Creakers!
Mrs Moore
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Hi Yassine,
This was another exciting piece of writing. I really liked the way you used action and emotion to draw me in . Next time think about your punctuation and how you can use it to control your reader.
I really want to know more about the Creakers!
Mrs Moore