CREAKERS

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1 Response to CREAKERS

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Yassine,

    This was another exciting piece of writing. I really liked the way you used action and emotion to draw me in . Next time think about your punctuation and how you can use it to control your reader.
    I really want to know more about the Creakers!

    Mrs Moore

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