Oh wow! What an exciting opening you have written Alessio, I really feel like I’m there and can feel the fear building. Next time consider other ways to incorporate your thoughts into your story. Keep up the great work Mrs Moore
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Oh wow! What an exciting opening you have written Alessio, I really feel like I’m there and can feel the fear building. Next time consider other ways to incorporate your thoughts into your story.
Keep up the great work
Mrs Moore