You have a fabulous narrator’s wand really drew me into your writing with your interesting word choices and detail; I really felt involved in your thoughts and wanted to know what happens next; this is something talented writers do.
Next time check all of your choices fit the style.
Hi Andrew,
You have a fabulous narrator’s wand really drew me into your writing with your interesting word choices and detail; I really felt involved in your thoughts and wanted to know what happens next; this is something talented writers do.
Next time check all of your choices fit the style.
Keep it up
Mrs Moore