The frighteing moment

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1 Response to The frighteing moment

  1. nanand says:

    Wow! What an intense and scary ending; I was gripped. I really liked the way you started off with a happy scene and things gradually got worse , this is something talented writers do. Next time take the time to check for erodes before you publish. There/ their: what’s the difference?

    Mrs Moore

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