Wow! What an intense and scary ending; I was gripped. I really liked the way you started off with a happy scene and things gradually got worse , this is something talented writers do. Next time take the time to check for erodes before you publish. There/ their: what’s the difference?
Wow! What an intense and scary ending; I was gripped. I really liked the way you started off with a happy scene and things gradually got worse , this is something talented writers do. Next time take the time to check for erodes before you publish. There/ their: what’s the difference?
Mrs Moore