AJs nightmare by Pasupathi Sivaruban

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3 Responses to AJs nightmare by Pasupathi Sivaruban

  1. Rayyan says:

    Hi,
    I love how you built up tension at the end and left it as a cliffhanger. Next time you could explain a bit more.

  2. keram says:

    Hi Pasupathi
    I like how you have built tension but I think you should explain more about the phrase.

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