The Mutation

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3 Responses to The Mutation

  1. sivap says:

    Nice use of suspence

  2. keram says:

    I like how you used suspense but next time use different sentence starters.

  3. Mrs. G. says:

    The narrator was lucky to have the family to hang on to during such a traumatic experience. Your piece is suspenseful. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G. , Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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