Nice use of suspence
I like how you used suspense but next time use different sentence starters.
Rayyan, The narrator was lucky to have the family to hang on to during such a traumatic experience. Your piece is suspenseful. Keep writing. Mrs. G. , Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
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Nice use of suspence
I like how you used suspense but next time use different sentence starters.
Rayyan,
The narrator was lucky to have the family to hang on to during such a traumatic experience. Your piece is suspenseful. Keep writing.
Mrs. G. , Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA