I think your story was da best because the amount of suspension and ominousness
thanks vacia
Hi, I love the suspense
Hi You’ve used a great variety of language to help paint a picture in my mind’s eye and create an atmosphere. Next time try to vary your sentence starters. Keep up the great writing. Mrs M
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I think your story was da best because the amount of suspension and ominousness
thanks vacia
Hi,
I love the suspense
Hi
You’ve used a great variety of language to help paint a picture in my mind’s eye and create an atmosphere.
Next time try to vary your sentence starters.
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs M