The sketchy house

3 Responses to The sketchy house

1. hussy says:

   February 26, 2020 at 8:40 am

   I like the huge amount of suspension

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2. Karin Poole Team 100 VA Beach, USA says:

   February 28, 2020 at 7:39 pm

   Wow! I wonder what’s going to happen to the delivery guy!You’ve left me wanting to know more.
   Next time check your punctuation before you hit publish.
   Great work.
   Karin Poole
   VA Beach
   USA

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3. nanand says:

   February 28, 2020 at 7:43 pm

   Hi Brindan,
   You made great use of varied vocabulary in your scary descriptive text and have a strong authorial voice. Next time check your punctuation before you publish. I really want to know what happens next- this is what talented writers do!
   Mrs M

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