Oh this sounds like it could be the start of a modern day Hansel and Gretel, we’re you influenced by that story? You have a clear authorial voice Robert, next time try to be more detailed and edit before you publish. Mrs Moore
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Oh this sounds like it could be the start of a modern day Hansel and Gretel, we’re you influenced by that story?
You have a clear authorial voice Robert, next time try to be more detailed and edit before you publish.
Mrs Moore