Wow! What a fabulously gripping piece of descriptive writing! I really like the way you also used questions to make me think. There or their: what’s the difference? Keep up the great writing. Mrs Moore
Good use of suspense, Shayaan!
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Wow! What a fabulously gripping piece of descriptive writing! I really like the way you also used questions to make me think.
There or their: what’s the difference?
Keep up the great writing.
Mrs Moore
Good use of suspense, Shayaan!