The Heartbreaker By Jabir 6B

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2 Responses to The Heartbreaker By Jabir 6B

  1. nanand says:

    Hi Jabir,

    You included lots of interesting detail and really left me wanting to know more about your two main characters and what happens to them; this is something talented writers do.
    Well done.
    Mrs M

  2. Mrs Abena (Team 100WC) says:

    Hi Jabir,
    Your story really builds suspense and has the reader wondering about a lot of questions.
    Thanks for sharing!

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