Hi Jabir,
You included lots of interesting detail and really left me wanting to know more about your two main characters and what happens to them; this is something talented writers do. Well done. Mrs M
Hi Jabir, Your story really builds suspense and has the reader wondering about a lot of questions. Thanks for sharing!
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Hi Jabir,
You included lots of interesting detail and really left me wanting to know more about your two main characters and what happens to them; this is something talented writers do.
Well done.
Mrs M
Hi Jabir,
Your story really builds suspense and has the reader wondering about a lot of questions.
Thanks for sharing!