Hi Robert,
This was a very unusual way to respond to the prompt and showed some great imagination. I wonder how heavy that house was and what happened next to Noah. Try not to write exactly as you speak.
Mrs M
Hello Robert, I like how you created ideas that might have explained why the house felt as if it was being lifted up. I really like the image you created of the boy trying to hold onto his house. Additional punctuation would have helped make your story clearer. Great ideas, though.
weird thoughts rob but kinda cool if you actually think about it
Hi Robert,
This was a very unusual way to respond to the prompt and showed some great imagination. I wonder how heavy that house was and what happened next to Noah. Try not to write exactly as you speak.
Mrs M
Hello Robert, I like how you created ideas that might have explained why the house felt as if it was being lifted up. I really like the image you created of the boy trying to hold onto his house. Additional punctuation would have helped make your story clearer. Great ideas, though.