Hello Sachien, I enjoyed reading your story. You have used some super vocabulary, I liked ‘It was time to ramble through my nightmare’. You created an unexpected twist by having a dragon appear. Check that your sentences use the correct type of punctuation. Well done keep entering the challenge.
Hello Sachien, I enjoyed reading your story. You have used some super vocabulary, I liked ‘It was time to ramble through my nightmare’. You created an unexpected twist by having a dragon appear. Check that your sentences use the correct type of punctuation. Well done keep entering the challenge.
that was the best story I have ever read