I thought the main character’s name – Russel – was very funny given the prompt this week. Well done for entertaining your audience! I liked the plot of your story. To make your writing even better, think about including some sound effects next time, and some dialogue… I hope to read more from you. Keep up the great work!
Mrs Pratt (Team 100WC)
Hi Zia,
I thought the main character’s name – Russel – was very funny given the prompt this week. Well done for entertaining your audience! I liked the plot of your story. To make your writing even better, think about including some sound effects next time, and some dialogue… I hope to read more from you. Keep up the great work!
Mrs Pratt (Team 100WC)
Hello zia
Wow i loved your adjectives!
Somran>>
Hi Zia!
Again you have created an amazing piece of work and made me proud!
I look forward to the next time.
Aisha