Truly amazing story Serena. Your short story sounds like something one of my favorite authors would have written. You use wonderfully descriptive words including action words. “The black shadowy figure” had me scared. The sign of a tallented writter isone who can make their readers feel. Just for your information, the word “accept” means to take something given and the word “except” means in addition to or besides. They are easily confused. Keep up the good work.
Truly amazing story Serena. Your short story sounds like something one of my favorite authors would have written. You use wonderfully descriptive words including action words. “The black shadowy figure” had me scared. The sign of a tallented writter isone who can make their readers feel. Just for your information, the word “accept” means to take something given and the word “except” means in addition to or besides. They are easily confused. Keep up the good work.
Well done serena! Loved your story very touching great use of words I also love your question
Amazig work
Somran
you must mean ‘Amazing’ anyway thanks Somran