Well done for this week’s 100wc writing, Aadeeb! I love how you built up the suspense by writing about shadows before letting me know exactly who they were. I’m glad the SWAT team were able to get there so quickly and arrest the robbers. I wish I had £5million!!
Great work, Aadeeb, I love your story idea for this week’s 100WC! I liked the line “the shadow ran across the pitch”, it really set the mood and increased the tension. Well done!
Well done! A dramatic piece of writing that builds suspense. I’d have liked to hear a little more about how the boys were feeling when they knew it was a crook but a good story despite this.
Well done for this week’s 100wc writing, Aadeeb! I love how you built up the suspense by writing about shadows before letting me know exactly who they were. I’m glad the SWAT team were able to get there so quickly and arrest the robbers. I wish I had £5million!!
Great work, Aadeeb, I love your story idea for this week’s 100WC! I liked the line “the shadow ran across the pitch”, it really set the mood and increased the tension. Well done!
Well done! A dramatic piece of writing that builds suspense. I’d have liked to hear a little more about how the boys were feeling when they knew it was a crook but a good story despite this.