Hi Raghib,
You use lots of specific detail to help people get a clear picture in your mind however you really need to think about your grammar, especially at the end. You’re making pronoun mistakes and are missing words which makes this a confusing read, as well as using capitals in the wrong places. You make a great point with your writing, don’t let silly mistakes let you down.
Hi Raghib,
You use lots of specific detail to help people get a clear picture in your mind however you really need to think about your grammar, especially at the end. You’re making pronoun mistakes and are missing words which makes this a confusing read, as well as using capitals in the wrong places. You make a great point with your writing, don’t let silly mistakes let you down.