Paradise by Pasupathi Sivaruban

6 Responses to Paradise by Pasupathi Sivaruban

1. nanand says:

   March 25, 2020 at 7:41 am

   Hi Pasupathi,

   What a dreamy description of an idyllic setting although I think I would like a quieter beach!
   This isn’t this week’s prompt so unfortunately I can’t enter this into the challenge.

   Mrs Moore

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   • sivap says:

     March 25, 2020 at 8:50 am

     It’s okay, I am a little bit confused.

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     • nanand says:

       March 25, 2020 at 9:37 am

       Can I help? Look at the prompt I pinged out to you

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2. sivap says:

   March 25, 2020 at 9:37 pm

   Miss I edited it.

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3. sivap says:

   March 25, 2020 at 11:26 pm

   I published my edited piece ,did it come if not please let me know and I’ll check again.

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   • nanand says:

     March 26, 2020 at 6:30 am

     Hi Pasupathi,
     I’ve published you and will leave you some new feedback. Great work for acting advice you’ve been given; I’ll make sure you’re entered for the challenge.
     Mrs M

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