Hi Saavi,
This was quite a dramatic tale, with lots of great use of story language . Next time try to include feelings in your writing. Good job Mrs Moore
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Hi Saavi,
This was quite a dramatic tale, with lots of great use of story language . Next time try to include feelings in your writing.
Good job
Mrs Moore