The unlike park by Spandana Singh

5 Responses to The unlike park by Spandana Singh

1. nanand says:

   March 29, 2020 at 12:53 pm

   Hi Spandana,
   I can see that you’ve acted on your feedback and created a very intriguing piece of writing. There are still some tense errors; remember we use the past perfect tense to talk about something that happened before a point in the past
   Mrs Moore

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2. Mr T Geary Team 100 says:

   March 30, 2020 at 8:19 am

   Dear Spandana,

   Thank you for sharing your writing this week. You did a great job of painting a picture in my mind, I can just imagine standing in that long line and being terrified when seeing my feet.

   Looking forward to seeing what you write next.
   Mr Geary Team 100

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3. sings says:

   March 30, 2020 at 12:09 pm

   Mrs Moore , what is this week’s prompt?

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   • nanand says:

     March 30, 2020 at 12:16 pm

     Hi Spandana,
     I sent this to you as a ping with some home learning. You can chose between including the phrase or using the 5 words. Shall I send it again?

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4. Máire O'Keeffe says:

   April 7, 2020 at 3:45 pm

   Hi Spandana
   I really enjoyed reading your 100 word challenge and I think you had a great scary twist at the end when you realised that your feet had turned into stone! I’m left wondering what happened next. Did your whole body turn into stone or did you manage to escape. Well done and keep up the good work.
   Máire O’Keeffe (Team 100 wc)
   Galway Ireland

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