Hi Islaa, thank you for sharing your 100WC with the world. Some good ideas here – perhaps try reading your writing to a friend and ask them to comment; this can sometimes show where editing is needed before publishing. You obviously have some good ideas so keep practising your writing to get these ideas down on paper 🙂
I enjoyed the excitement of your piece. Do be sure to carefully edit as it can be confusing to read without proper editing. Keep on writing!
Hi Islaa, thank you for sharing your 100WC with the world. Some good ideas here – perhaps try reading your writing to a friend and ask them to comment; this can sometimes show where editing is needed before publishing. You obviously have some good ideas so keep practising your writing to get these ideas down on paper 🙂