Greetings from Australia arena fan. Wow! I wasn’t expecting the ending. I can see the effort you are putting in to choosing descriptive words. I could clearly picture the story in my mind. But I thought The phone call would be a hoax and Max would do his homework and all would be well. I wonder if your Max was the Max out of Where The Wild Things Are? I enjoyed reading your response to this week’s 100WC. Thank you.
great story Arafah it made me get a shiver down my spine like you were actually telling me this heart pounding story
I like the bit where you did “the silver knife shot towards him and he fell dead!” keep up the good work:):):):):)
What a dramatic story Arafah. Your class is doing some great work on the 100 word challenge, I have read Zia’s before. I liked the font you chose, very nice to read. I hope some of your stories have happy endings! I loved it though, great imagination. Keep it up.
Greetings from Australia arena fan. Wow! I wasn’t expecting the ending. I can see the effort you are putting in to choosing descriptive words. I could clearly picture the story in my mind. But I thought The phone call would be a hoax and Max would do his homework and all would be well. I wonder if your Max was the Max out of Where The Wild Things Are? I enjoyed reading your response to this week’s 100WC. Thank you.
great story Arafah it made me get a shiver down my spine like you were actually telling me this heart pounding story
I like the bit where you did “the silver knife shot towards him and he fell dead!” keep up the good work:):):):):)
by Janna, your classmate :):):):):):)
What a dramatic story Arafah. Your class is doing some great work on the 100 word challenge, I have read Zia’s before. I liked the font you chose, very nice to read. I hope some of your stories have happy endings! I loved it though, great imagination. Keep it up.
fab work arafah it was truthfully scary but next time try to use similes.
your friend amina