I like the start of your blog it’s great the way you descibe the leaves and the shadow behind you, it builds up nicely. However I feel the ending is not as strong as the start, and I’m not sure what happens next. Maybe something to think about for next time, but I did enjoy reading it.
I like the start of your blog it’s great the way you descibe the leaves and the shadow behind you, it builds up nicely. However I feel the ending is not as strong as the start, and I’m not sure what happens next. Maybe something to think about for next time, but I did enjoy reading it.